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The Door to Dreams

Somewhere there is still hidden
  A door to childhoods lost dreams

A Place of Enchantments magical
Melodies dance in golden streams

Days spent in endless summer days
Where night falls like a lovers kiss

Where I left that child I once was
The one that I now do truly miss

So at night in dreams I search
For that door to that forgotten place

For there is where my queen awaits
With her soft smile upon her face

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  • judmc
    May 28

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    Sweet Poem

    A poem In search of memorable reminiscences and dreams from nostalgic childhood days nicely
    expressed in descriptive terms and imagery.Well Done!George....


  • Puppydog gold member
    February 27

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    ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS!!!

    We do indeed lose some of our dreamland fun as we grow older! I also try to relive those sweet dreams at night in my new dreams also. 's


  • WhisperOcean
    February 18

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    How true are your words. We are all searching for that inner child that was left behind for - well, many reasons!


  • pixiestix gold member
    February 17

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    I really like this. Memories of childhood, when things were simple and possibilities through imagination were infinite.

    I know I'd like to go back for a visit

    Beautiful write.


  • Sandygram
    January 9

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    Another heartfelt poem you have penned John. This captures the heart of the reader who still remembers those happy childhod dreams. Many of which were never found. A pleasure to read my friend. Hugs and Smiles.

    Bless You,
    Love, Sandy


  • shadowraith
    January 8
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    beautifully crafted

    ahh the door to childhood's dreams hope you find it and then maybe invite me lol
    brilliant write


  • Melodies
    January 8

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    Tenderly penned and so beautiful!



    Dear children we shall always be,
    for enchantment lends to see
    the happy things of childhood's sights
    to charm us on our lonely nights.

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