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With you

Eyes see the light
and
Ears hear the sound
and
I can't feel right
if
You're not around
cos
With you, true love abounds

A contest entry

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  • Aleczandra
    January 11
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    This was a beautiful emotion with few words.
    Really nice


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 9

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    OH yes

    love is many mixed emotions, love this as it depicts love in a soft way,thank you for this entry
    good luck
    MOOM


  • luckypoet7
    January 8
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    wow...

    well i love it i just think it could use more discriptive words... but it is very good