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Mountain Fist (Lifting Everest)



To hold a mountain tight within your fist
  is a heavy, dragging kind of curse;
    one that either makes a man strong
or leaves him unable to move.

AndI, capturing Everest
  am yet sure which of the two I am.
Most often I am not alone
  but there are days, like now
    that everything but me has gone.

At times I can lift the sky like a lid
  and see past into what is good.
At others I am completely blind
    and stumble on even the smallest stone.

So my prayer, lifted to this January dawn
  is that a mountain would become a ladder
that I would learn to climb
  and so, somehow,
become the gold that won the fire.

Author notes


I'm growing up, I suppose. Some days are easy, some are a cliff that I can't yet take, but I've found a peace that digs low and flies high over any obstacles. May you, reader, find the same.

-Thefallout
www.theeverlastingfallout.com/read

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    January 24

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    this is really good.i love it, but you need a space between andi.lol
    but the poem is wonderful, and great message
    thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥