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We used to be friends

Something strange
Something wonderful
Something new
Something it shouldn't be,

I never thought it could be.

But it is.


And I love you.

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First poem in a long time... just re finding my feet

A contest entry

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  • Sameo
    January 12

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    Love manages to fit every missing piece in a puzzle no matter how hard and confusing it seems.
    I'll say you got them back(ur feet).
    Nice poem.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 9

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    cute

    and yes you found them nicely...balanced and formed
    to understand, thank you for this entry, good luck
    MM


  • Rheea gold member
    January 9
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    you found them!!