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Four Years Ago...

Four years ago I made a promise
One that stole my heart
I wish I had the words
But I don’t know where to start

I stood at the altar
I looked in your eyes
Together we promised
To spend our lives

Never could I comprehend
The love that we do share
Nothing that I could write
Could even try to compare

My life is so much different now
I have you to hold me tight
Your love wraps around me
And your kisses make it right

Our marriage isn’t perfect
And that’s ok with me
Because I know what’s in your heart
Our love is plain to see

So here we are four years later
My love for you still grows
Happy Anniversary my husband
I love you more then you know

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January 8th, 2005 I married my husband

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  • Mornwen
    May 1

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    Lovely

    That is really sweet, it is so close to an iambic meter it's amazing. Reminds me of getting married again. It's even more wonderful because I know the two of you.

  • zorman32
    March 24
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    Tribute

    A very nice one, congratulations! Well done


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    February 2
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    wow, such a beautiful heartwarming write, this really warms the soul, a wonderful piece.


  • fernandafreire
    January 29

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    That was a very nice and well dedicated poem to your
    loving husband

    Happy Anniversary and Many MORE!!!

    Cheers,
    Fayfreire


  • August Starlight silver member
    January 22
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    That's so sweet!


  • ImUrFadingMemory
    January 19

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    Beautiful Write.

    Aww this poem is so sweet! I like the background you chose, it fits well. and your words flowed very naturally. This is a beautiful wirte! And I'm glad to hear your everlasting love even 4 years later! I hope your husband has read this! great write, thanks for sharing. it gives hope to others. Happy Anniversary!

    ~Madison~

  • Bob Fox
    January 8
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    Amy

    So very beauitful. Happy anniversary and I do hope you show this to your lucky huby.

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