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Kiss Me Softly


Soft whispers dance
upon shades of silken wishes

tickling senses
with wicked wonder

as hearts pulsate
to passion's perfect beat

crossing boundaries,
without a second thought

no border patrol
no stop signs

when emotions flow
into glistening gaze

autopilot,
flip the surrender switch

no need to translate
the language of love

her answer,
definitively divine ~



♥♥

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a collaboration by:
looneyeclipse & poet2angels

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  • Errant Panther
    January 22

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    very beautiful collab, I love the lines "shades of silken wishes" and " crossing boundaries without a second thought" love can often transcend itself in such a feeling.


    • poet2angels gold member
      January 22
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      Thank you, Cuz
      TY for always being so supportive
      True friends are hard to come by....

      Lynda♥


  • Endeavor gold member
    January 16

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    Excellent

    no need to translate
    the language of love

    her answer,
    definitively divine ~

    Great colorabation her
    Very well done

    Rick


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 9

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    I like the metaphors and the immages you weaved to bring the message in a very effective way..love it..and thanks for the entry in my contest...


  • Fug-azi
    January 9
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    Like two vines entwined, you compliment each other so well.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    January 8

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    * officially puts in writing included for this comment that you both need to collab more often * * would consider it a cure to his friend's hurting deep inside * Lmao I love those last time small stanza like lines because well if love were that divine and easily done then I wouldn't be having a heart full of darkness & being feeling icy cold that surrounds me. Bah who needs love * shoots whoever intented that word * LOL! any ways off that this is a very beautifully penned poem by my two true friends that I love alot its amazing how you both can weather the storm from alot of things and yet at the same time you continue to produce such beautiful deeply penned poetry together *sighs* just a very beautiful love poem and kepe up the good work Aunt Lynda and Uncle Tim for you both for you Aunt Lynda *high five* for Tim. keep on blending ink beautifully


    Warmest reguards from the flooded Pacific Northwest,
    Paul aka Tiger

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