As many targets stand before me effective I must be
for my task must be swift & silent as death
the rich never suspect it
& guards never catch me
i live by the creed
so i'll die by it
i must not fail
for death waits for the sounds of submission
i'll never quit
outrunning death as long as i can
my heart pounding
adrenaline always pumps
my task is accomplished
better watch your back intently
because you'll never see me
A contest entry
- Poetry! by luna-midnight.
1800 points, ended January 24, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so.... how is it???
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Well wow. Well wow. (speechless with awe)
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Hmm....
I really like this. I'm impressed. It is rare one can so vividly define what is but a desired vision in our minds. You've got talent. Brava on a great write. Keep writing!
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sneaky lol
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I loved it
this was really good I don't know why any one wouldn't like it
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youre a good writer better than i am or probably ever will be
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haha, awesome! i could see you coming though,
thanks for entering and good luck
Stephanie ♥ -
i looooooooooove it! this is really good. a person can tell even tho u dont say it that this is about an assassin.
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nice i loved it! it was dark an great!
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