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Love Poem

To see another in pain
and giving up your plans,
to see them through.
And in their finding peace,
know this love non can compare.

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If you fel like you arent receiving love then know you must give to receive try it and you shall see

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  • Rheea gold member
    January 9
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    you love people ,I love how you do that sweet Patti


  • maralisa silver member
    January 8
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    bravo a wonderful poem so deep and meaningful good luck inthe contest pattymaralisa


  • luckypoet7
    January 8

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    i love how short and sweet and to the point it is... i love it though and it is so true... good job keep writting


  • StarEyes
    January 8

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    How true! All one can do is see how it happens to work out... Sometimes I wonder why we love... But it is something that is always there ain't it? Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • ur poem is true but only time can tell i guess finding someone
    but anyways good luck in the contest


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 8

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    OH so

    true, love is perfect in every way as long as you give it and hopefully receive,if not their loss, thank you for this entry...good luck
    MM

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