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My Hiding Place

Her heart is my sanctuary,
a hiding place for tears,
love the incense
she scents in my soul,
the intoxicating embraces
bring rapture’s entrancing years.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 9
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    Just gorgeous bro!
    Gaylene


  • Meroza
    January 8

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    This is stunningly good, perfectly put together into a perfect balance of dark and love.

    Best of luck in the contest!


  • maralisa silver member
    January 8

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    aw wow this just stuningly beautiful good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • JinSays gold member
    January 8

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    I think I missed your writing enough that I now have tears pouring down my face.
    Love shoudl be like this, but for some of us unfortunate souls it is not.
    I wish you the best.
    Love,
    jin


  • StarEyes
    January 8

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    My dear Brother,

    Oh my goodness... This is scrumptious! I love the gentleness of this write! And that "hiding place" is the best, isn't it?

    Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 8
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    shot right through the heart


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    January 8

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    A heart as a sanctuary..very beautiful words. Awww, a very embracing read. Best of luck on a write well done!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 8

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    LOVELY

    intoxication is awesome with the perfect soulmate
    i like this a lot, thank you for this entry...good luck
    MM

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