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Just a Dream

I cant breath without u
I lay there sleeping,
dreaming of u.
Wishing you were near,
When i wake to the sound of my alarm,
I look around,and call ur name,
Just to see that ur gone,
that it was only a dream.
a dream that i wish didnt end.

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  • serenity silvermoon
    January 8

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    very sad but a very good poem indeed love is funny and hurtful but it can also be very wonderful as well good luck in the contest


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 8

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    this is sad

    but in your heart memories are still so real! thank you for this entry and good luck
    misticmoonlite