To stroll that lovely foliage scene,
inhale the scents of emerald green
feel the moment become serene,
renders the heart a flush so lively,
unless in ignorance you play with poison ivy!
Seeking nature’s beauty in every patch
comes with need for wisdom to catch
so you don’t end up with a need to scratch!
A contest entry
- Nature Short Pieces by misticmoonlite.
600 points, ended January 9, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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giggling still
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Aww lol this is great! A lovely poem with some wonderful humour! Put a big smile on this dial! And as well you pointed out the good and not so good parts of nature!
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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That ending is perfect, I enjoyed reading this one, big time!
Best of luck!
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wow a brilliant poem I love the imagery and the ending is so funny lol
good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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LOL
SO true the 3 poined leaves or the 5 pointed, which is poison ivy?
I love the humor in this , thank you for this entry, good luck
MM
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very refreshing....
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Enjoyable little poem! I really like the first 4 lines- then the twist of humor. So true, unless you're not allergic to poison ivy (like me, he-he)
good luck-
KW~
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