Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

attraction

subdued sea
till yesterday,
rose in ferocity
to touch the moon.

they have rendezvous
fortnightly,
orb and tide have
a way of communicating.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    January 8

    Edit | Reply

    Lovely!

    This paints a stunning pix in a few words so you aced the goal of this Contest! Trust you'll do well.
    Thanks for this.


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    January 8

    Edit | Reply

    WOW,

    Yes the natural formation of the atmosphere speaks volumes of the moon and her movement in our thoughts, thank you for this entry. good luck
    MM


  • maralisa silver member
    January 8
    Edit | Reply
    aw a beautiful poem good luck inthe contest dadmaralisa