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Find A Flower For Me/

Find me a flower

a flower to fill my hour

a flower full with scented bliss

a flower for my senses to kiss

 

so i can become lost in its maze
under sunshine's golden haze
of intricate design
and its willingness to shine

 

a wild flower of the valleys

 or a lotus of the wise

something to compliment my day-dream

caressed by blue-skies

 

a flower that is free
like the spirit in me
because i can't find a flower

that's not posessed or buzzing
with the unsociable bee

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  • Applehead
    January 10
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    lol i always forget the aplause when i use the quick comment!


  • Applehead
    January 10

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    heee this has such a cute and lovely quality on the surface. I love how under all the pretty facade there is a searching and a loss that is so subtle yet very touching. You have written this beautifully


  • ScarletO gold member
    January 8

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    Wonderful rhyme and images you have woven. I wonder if this is nature's flower that grows in the garden or something a little more wild? I guess I am the bee that flies around wondering.


  • nilav
    January 8
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    beautiful...deserves the trophy..


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 8
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    NICE poem

    flowers are inspiring plants to write about, thank you for this entry, good luck in my contest...mm


  • Simply Olivia
    January 8
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    I love this poem!

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