glistening is the love from above
showered on the soft gentle earth
the earth bows to the sky in supplication
for more and more and more..........
soothing is the scented breeze
dancing on the flowery spring
and me, with the buds and blossoms
yearns for more and more and more.....
thrilled in the melody of footsteps
the earth is illuminated
blossoming in the warmth of embrace
longing for more and more and more...
the stars fluttering with dazzling love
wrapped in sparkling smile and laugh
scattering dreams to fill the earth
to glow more and more amd more.....
A contest entry
- Nature Short Pieces by misticmoonlite.
600 points, ended January 9, 2009, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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HI....I always love your poems and try to read and it really inspires me a lot..Thank you so much ...
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the stars fluttering with dazzeling love
wrapped in sparkling smile and laugh
scattered dreams to fill the earth
to glow more and more and more...
exquisite imagery
God bless yoy my friend...
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a beautiful piece of poetry that is descriptive and that flows so effortlessly. It is a real pleasure to read and is very soothing. I really enjoyed this poem. great job.
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You have green fingers...
For growing positivity of the mind!
I love the way the last line of each stanza takes the poem in a different direction with a new context.
I also love the rhythm.
*clappies*
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Simply lovely...It makes me want to read it
more and more and more...
Have a lovely week
Hugs...Eddy
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this piece was just beautiful! wonderful imagery, nice ideas... liked the repetition as well. very good write :-) thanks so much for the kind comment. Blessings!
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a lovely poem with a nice flow
Always wanting more from mother nature as there is no better artist than nature!
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This is just beautiful.
"thrilled in the melody of footsteps
the earth is illuminated
blossoming in the warmth of embrace"
Such lovely imagery throughout.
Great write.
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This is gorgeous! Nice job!
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LOVELY!!!!
Yes! The more I see the wonders around me the more I want to see. Nature is amazing and so helpful in our time of stress and sadness. ;f's
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Very interesting write. Lively descriptions of beauty and love.
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I love this and the things you talk about in each individual stanza. It also keeps me wanting more.
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very interesting piece, i like it!
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Lovely
blossoming in the warmth of embrace
longing for more and more and more...
The passionate and voluptuous sensuality of these lines is enticing.
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wow
great write good luck in the contest& keep on penning the brilliant work
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oh so true
we all seem to be in need of more guidance from above, no matter what is in store, reliance is there, thank you for this entry, good luck
MOON
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