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Best be Doing


Grandpa always said:

DO it
Do it RIGHT
Do it right NOW!


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Grandpa Flavy

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    January 24, 2009
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    He sounds sharp as a tack. Love the title, too.


  • Mary O gold member
    January 19, 2009

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    Poetic wasn't he? Perfect message to grow by. I'll have to give this one a try on my 9 grandchildren.


  • cup-a-joe silver member
    January 13, 2009
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    Grandpa was brought up in a different world than we live in now.
    I like this.
    Joe


  • Kuranya gold member
    January 10, 2009
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    And this is so very true, no time dilly dallying lol. Well done. Best to you in the contest


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    January 9, 2009
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    Your grandpa wasn't much of a one for planning, was he!


  • DolceVito gold member
    January 8, 2009
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    Nice...Sounds like something I would say to my kids."wink*

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