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Sky's of solitude

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Flourish my soul,
to fly on high,
to become a bird,
of heavens passage,
so I can soar across,
Olympian heights,
etching bonds of,
silken repose,
through the limits,
of solitude's rise,
embellishing out,
bonds of harmony,
with every hover,
my wings take,
then let me confide,
in your heart to cleanse,
my soul with everlasting,
love and light.

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Oh God ! make me a bird, bless me to fly, towards you...Unknown.

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  • FransB gold member
    January 18

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    Placing yourself

    within His reach will allow your soul to flourish. But more so, as you mention, within His heart - the place to be. Each flap of wing allows the bird to breath deeper - your words do the same. Blessing to you. Frans


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 9

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    So soft and soothing are your words...sis this is so comforting with beautiful word choice and depth...such lovely imagery and feel...excellent take on the prompt.

    Best,
    sis

  • PureCountry
    January 9

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    Maralisa

    your use of vocabulary is wondderul and the way you weave it all together is amazing. The flowing phrases, the imagery engendered.

    All of this adds up to a poem that shoulld hold its own in the contest. Best of Luck!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 9

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    I love the flow and the message which you weaved with a poetic softness..indeed a moving and effective communication here attracts me..well done...

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 9
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    It is beautiful

    It does a lovely job conveying the desire for the sweet freedom of flight.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    January 8

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    awww, this is verp spiatual and lovely. good luck and take care


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 8

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    I adore this piece of poetry
    You have captured the prompt and your words flow in such artistic creative way
    Beautiful hun
    Best wishes and good luck
    Julie xx


  • Desire gold member
    January 8

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    Oh My~

    Oh My I just Love the picture to begin with also the words You have weaved Beautiful~
    the energy jumps off the page- grabs hard to depths of Spirit
    Excellent this is~

    Adore how You took this prompt
    Wow!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes in the contest too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • daviscth silver member
    January 8

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    Your words are so beautiful and leave me with the feeling that I really could take flight. Thanks for sharing this delightful poem with me. I loved it. Good luck in the contest sweetie.

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