weak from a hunger too strong to ignore,
passion sways to a slow dance
as our bodies feed on intimate pleasures,
hands dance seductively, without restraint
nourishing rhythms we can't control,
desire's music consumes each touch
increasing the pulsating tempo of want,
savoring this tryst of intimate harmony
a taste so sweet upon my lips,
swallowed up in ecstacy's symphony
we lay sated in abandon's song.
Author notes
Artist Credit-Unknown
A contest entry
- Seduce My Senses With Words Of Silken Beauty. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 8, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ah the tempo of want, and need, i want this but i need that etc, it's all up in the air of wishes for kisses. a good poem.


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excellent~
Passion and music
Both go together so well
This is sexy hot and steamy
I think I need to re read Thurs when its only gonna be 11 degrees here in Ky........was scheduled for chemo not even getting out with it that cold and a windchill of 13 below.....brrrrrrrrrr send hubby after everything I need
Love this
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~




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Wow, now that's cold!! Tell hubby to keep you warm
I wish you all the very best with your chemo, bless your heart. My thoughts and prayers are with you.
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Oh my this is just gorgeous and steamy! I am in awe of your imagery! You just have a way with words that I love.
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene


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Aww, thank you Gaylene. Coming from one of AP's best..I am touched that you enjoy my ramblings.
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Thank you for your beautifully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thanks for the kind comment..I enjoyed writing for your contest.
Linda
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As usual you outdo yourself with your works
Nice job
Loved It


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And you, my dear friend..are always so sweet. I don't feel too good about my writes, but hell it's still fun
Thank you as always sister dear.
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Passion and music go so well together don't they! You have blended them sensuously and beautifully here sis!


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You are soooo kind Sis, but I am ashamed I posted this piece o'shit lol That's what being under the influence of narcotics does to a mind hehehe but anyway I thank you
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what?!?! No no no.. I cannot have that, you saying this is o'shit.. for it surely is not! I dont' think you could be medicated enough to write crap! 
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Gimme time LOL It's some good shit I'm on..supposed to have total bedrest..I got tired of being lazy
so here I am, buzzing and all.
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LOL.. buzzing hey! Sounds good
I hope you're looking after yourself though Sis and resting too
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Yep, I am..just got so bored of laying around. I'm good, thank you dear..how are you??
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Yes.. I know when I've been confined to bestrest it is boring!!
I'm doing very well indeed at the moment
I should do a quickie, and you should enter it!! That'd help with the boredom
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Lord help us all, but I'm up for it..if you are..
warning though, I can't be held responsible for what I
say at the present time lol
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I shall take note of that disclaimer then
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make it easy lol
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Sis,
Oh my what a read! This is awesome! I love it! This is great! Sounds like some dreams........
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta


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a sweet dream
Thanks for reading and commenting my friend.
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Very seductive.
mmm nice.

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Now..if only I had a magic wand to make it come true hehe. Thanks bro, you're a sweety.
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