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Sweet Intoxication

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under the influence of heated flirtation
weak from a hunger too strong to ignore,
passion sways to a slow dance
as our bodies feed on intimate pleasures,

hands dance seductively, without restraint
nourishing rhythms we can't control,
desire's music consumes each touch
increasing the pulsating tempo of want,

savoring this tryst of intimate harmony
a taste so sweet upon my lips,
swallowed up in ecstacy's symphony
we lay sated in abandon's song.


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  • ah the tempo of want, and need, i want this but i need that etc, it's all up in the air of wishes for kisses. a good poem.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 12
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    excellent~

    Passion and music
    Both go together so well
    This is sexy hot and steamy
    I think I need to re read Thurs when its only gonna be 11 degrees here in Ky........was scheduled for chemo not even getting out with it that cold and a windchill of 13 below.....brrrrrrrrrr send hubby after everything I need
    Love this
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      January 12
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      Wow, now that's cold!! Tell hubby to keep you warm I wish you all the very best with your chemo, bless your heart. My thoughts and prayers are with you.

  • Oh my this is just gorgeous and steamy! I am in awe of your imagery! You just have a way with words that I love.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      January 9
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      Aww, thank you Gaylene. Coming from one of AP's best..I am touched that you enjoy my ramblings.

  • Thank you for your beautifully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    January 8

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    As usual you outdo yourself with your works
    Nice job
    Loved It


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      January 8
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      And you, my dear friend..are always so sweet. I don't feel too good about my writes, but hell it's still fun Thank you as always sister dear.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 8

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    Passion and music go so well together don't they! You have blended them sensuously and beautifully here sis!


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      January 8
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      You are soooo kind Sis, but I am ashamed I posted this piece o'shit lol That's what being under the influence of narcotics does to a mind hehehe but anyway I thank you


      • kiwigirljacks gold member
        January 8
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        what?!?! No no no.. I cannot have that, you saying this is o'shit.. for it surely is not! I dont' think you could be medicated enough to write crap!


        • Carolina Moon gold member
          January 8
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          Gimme time LOL It's some good shit I'm on..supposed to have total bedrest..I got tired of being lazy so here I am, buzzing and all.


          • kiwigirljacks gold member
            January 8
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            LOL.. buzzing hey! Sounds good I hope you're looking after yourself though Sis and resting too


            • Carolina Moon gold member
              January 8
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              Yep, I am..just got so bored of laying around. I'm good, thank you dear..how are you??


              • kiwigirljacks gold member
                January 8
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                Yes.. I know when I've been confined to bestrest it is boring!!

                I'm doing very well indeed at the moment

                I should do a quickie, and you should enter it!! That'd help with the boredom


  • StarEyes
    January 8

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    Sis,

    Oh my what a read! This is awesome! I love it! This is great! Sounds like some dreams........

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • Very seductive.

    mmm nice.


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      January 8
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      Now..if only I had a magic wand to make it come true hehe. Thanks bro, you're a sweety.

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