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Desired and Teased

I’m turned on
by thoughts of you
amid work
stolen kisses in the kitchen
your body pressed, burning mine
firm against the wall
electrifying my body
with shards of longing
stabbing through.

Deep…

I wander through the day
a slave to lustful thoughts
of you
flying high, intoxicated
pressed by my need…
And for the burns you leave
as your fingers trail
finding crevices and crests
where no other eye can see
I sigh…
softly, in urgency
desire flaming my day
while you assault
my senses with sneaky kisses
searing a path
known and unknown
of passion
rising to peak
till I can stand no more

- Copyright Sandy

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  • Yes

    A very good Lust piece. I say yes because not only is it a good piece but the imagery and emotion is just wow. I felt the emotion, I felt.... lustful. This was a very nice write and it was a very good way to depict lust. Nicely done.

    Josh

  • I say Yes... Its a nice Lust piece. Good luck in our contest.

  • Thank you for your beautifully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • shadowraith
    January 8
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    wow

    so totally alive wouldnt change a thing