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whisper

You gave me life; so beautiful life
You shared love; so unpredictable love
.. You have me as much as you owe me 'You'

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its just true, i cant explain why i wrote that. Its just pretty much thru the heart

Feel while you read it, and express how you feel. . ..

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  • glassrose11
    January 24
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    aww this is so short and sweet!! i like this poem. ur pretty sensitive 4 a guy


  • no win no fee
    January 8
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    you are a sensitive soul Mansoor. This is both simple and beautiful. xx