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Buddha (on a bap-tism)

You; ‘pushen persian’
Dedicated to the deafening,
Here is south, water is suffering
And there in north there is a thirst for fevers
Every quarter spent, signified to the cent of a pauper and pent,
Rent your hair to the shavers pawn brokers
Let your head feel the cold
Your brain will freeze    and numb
You’ll forget everything you once had known
Every memory directed in a hollow dome

Temperature is only temporary,
Here is your hearing, and your ears,
There’s the blank and the shivers
Also, murals, waters of showers
You wait for a flood, wait for hours

Heard the sounds of the sum’what-not,
You had forgot,
For a second
That was relaxation

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  • Shantti
    January 16
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    This is awesome.

    You’ll forget everything you once had known
    Every memory directed in a hollow dome

    I never thought of relaxation like that before, but can see the correlation. Excellent poectic description on what appears to me to be meditation.
    I enjoy your writting.

    • suezzie

      no way - just seen in my notes you had a contest running - i'm too late - hope it went ok for you

      thanks for reading againce - i like your poetic slice of muffinetry:
      Excellent poectic description on what appears to me to be meditation.

      adios xx