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Freed, finally


Free fall;
Casting a curve of births and deaths,
through the parabola of dreams and fate

She falls.

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picture credit: the struggle by rosiehardy @ flickr

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  • Walk-Free
    January 9

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    i love how you started the poem with 'free fall' and ended it with 'she falls'.

    "Casting a curve of births and deaths,
    through the parabola of dreams and fate"

    beautiful words.


  • Jesann gold member
    January 8
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    Amazing thoughts and wording to this.
    Great take on the prompt.
    Excellent.


  • chilali
    January 8
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    Wow. Amazing word choice! Loved this! Good luck in the contest.

    Much love
    Ylova