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Animal Instinct

Two together we walk the crooked path
beasts of a more primitive time
Black & silver against fair skin
my duty to you is bound

In an earlier time you lay
against my breast
to suckle the milk of life
my soul sensitive to your hunger

Now you have grown to your full form
the animal realm has won
Sweet Mother, now turned lover
I am defenseless in your needs

No more nights of lucid dreams
you come to me without a sound
Only cold touch upon my flesh
to rouse me from my slumber

My beast, true & pure
I know you feel my heart beat in yours
together we go in this life
for who ever had one so true

Your name I have upon my lips
I quiver to hear it in shrill scream
I will say it now that none will hear
but you my only love...

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    January 11

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    Great stuff!!!

    Compelling narrative that flowed seamlessly, made for a captivating read & enthralled throughout...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!

  • Thank you for your beautifully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 8
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    well done

    good luck in the contest