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Jazzy Fresh~ #2 The Remix

Invigorated, is every piece within me,

as I breathe the essence of your beautiful, silken breasts,

chocolate scents are naturally enticing my desires I confess.

Long wet kisses raise my spirits among the rest,

as you arrest me in the cuffs of your flesh, my jazzy fresh. 

Strum to my vulnerabilities with your sexy violin,

I'll bend my knees, and feel the heat of destiny upon me

as you tap me like a grand piano key,

laying upon me like your vanilla bed spread

romancing me with your body talk...

I feel like a lyrical note in this utopia world,

my baby girl, let’s let our lust unfurl.

You make a grown man mushy,

to weak to speak a word compared to your poem’s paragraph.

You’re my dream, my pornographic photograph,

I see in my fantasies, and feel in my needing loins.

I would take a kiss, and cherish your cherry lipstick,

 but as you’ve given me more of your tight lickerish

I only wish to explore every inch of your tastes with my tongue.

 

Yum, yum, yum, I am here to be the ambassador of your erected rum

just take your hands, put them on my bad girl buns

and let me work my sweetness.

Just run your tongue up and down this dripping sweet weakness.

The only witnesses we'll need is the innocents of horny by standers ,

frankly if you keep blowing in my ear

I am going to let my split heavenly vagina go ahead

and pour down the tears.

Mushy my babe, I have some sex for your stereo

when you want the real orgasm feel, you be sure to come to Mrs. Skills.

I have a meal in my breasts

just tell my sweat how you want these thighs to ride your lap

and I can make you moan and clinch my neck in passion,

gasping, passing out in your arms I'll do you anywhere

because I love the gaze you give me with the sweetest charms.

You won't detest that you hate what’s up under my dress

because this cherry black jigga of mine stay a complete thick white mess.

Come cuddle up with me Mushy

I'm missing you like crazy all of a sudden.

 

You know how to push all the right buttons,

I'll weave to wear cream inbetween your dark, delicious walls 

so I can be the part of you that’s filling all those erotic voids.

As your fingertips trace sexual healings upon my back,

you feel my sack fill with thick white whip, 

heated especially for your love-shack slide and grip 

as I give you all my intentions with my pole’s penetration,

and though I’m elated I keep my poise, for I refuse to come alone,

for this wish is felt by two, and you know how I wish to please you,

and this fountain can only erupt in unity,

and I’m pleased you are missing me like crazy baby,

for I feel the same flame.

As we lit this desire on fire, we released all those penthouse fluids,

we can breathe the honesty of raw satisfaction.

As we lie beside one another's sighs in sweet ecstasy.

Author notes

           Link for part one: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4933987

      The baddest chick: http://allpoetry.com/theredcatjazzoflove

        I took very great pleasure penning this with Mushy

             he is the King of many things. The Baddest.

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  • siahaan
    March 23, 2009
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  • Angelflower
    February 16, 2009

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    and here I thought it couldn't get any hotter! I need a really cold shower now!! or go roll in the snow ..lol. you two write so well together!! bravo!!! my lord ya'll know how to steam things up!!! thanks much for sharing! lol.

    Angel

  • liltxgirl
    January 24, 2009
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    that was great i really enjoyed it.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    January 8, 2009

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    I'm lovin part two and I await for part three!!!! Great one you two




    Strum to my vulnerabilities with your sexy violin,
    I'll bend my knees, and feel the heat of destiny upon me
    as you tap me like a grand piano key,
    laying upon me like your vanilla bed spread

    frankly if you keep blowing in my ear
    I am going to let my split heavenly vagina go ahead
    and pour down the tear

    I have a meal in my breasts
    just tell my sweat how you want these thighs to ride your lap
    and I can make you moan and clinch my neck in passion




    • poeticweaver gold member
      January 9, 2009
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      -hugs-

      Thanks for all your support, she's a blast to pen with for sure, thanks for reading us. Peace, love, and light!


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      January 8, 2009
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      you shittin me right? a part to this it could be possible i need to keep some muse for fuck my sexy voice part 2 gal we may thanks babe


  • poetryrocksmysox
    January 8, 2009
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    So Hott & Fresh!

    You two did an excellent job!


  • darell
    January 8, 2009

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    This is...

    a treasure chest of hot desire
    spilling over like precious gold.
    Illuminating images brush against
    a canvas of pure lust.
    Creating the perfect interludes
    of passion and romance. Excellent!!
    You two burned up the page.


  • Introvert2006
    January 8, 2009
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    Damn.. I Love It!

    Part #2 is beastly!


  • theredcatjazzoflove
    January 8, 2009

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    god damn this is a good poem goodness i don't say that becuase i am the baddest poet feat in this you dig
    we have written a few cuts but this one it is very damn hot love it


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    January 8, 2009

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    ooh paparapapa part II this is some long night of jazzin'...music, chocolate on vanilla sheets, music and body bumpin' and all that jazz


  • Intricate Wordsmith
    January 8, 2009

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    Well Sir, you've done it yet again . . . This piece by far has been your best one that you have written recently. I love how every line has an emotion and it's own story. My favorite line is "I feel like a lyrical note in this utopia world" it is a very good simile. Brava! Well-written!


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    January 8, 2009

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    ywet another finely mashed penned poem together as you two have that sparkling connection thatd efys all others. anyw ays a sweetly penned well mixed together poem and wlel its just an amazingwrite all round. anyw ays keep up the good work you two.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    January 8, 2009

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    Oh yeah, this is sweet and so HOT!
    I love the fact that you two did a part
    two to the last one. Is there a part three
    in the works yet??? Beautiful and well
    written! Thanks a lot for sharing this
    one with me and keep up the wonderful
    work here!




    Jeremy0826

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