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windows

I put my ear down to the ground
and listened
  for once

I heard you crawling
                        wanting
and leaving me sucked of all the life force
I never wanted to regain
like
not
falling in the little holes lies make in-between your ribs




I feel my heart pounding in my feet
little clocks reminding me
time still exists no matter how hard you close your eyes and try to fall asleep








I know you are afraid
truth is I am too
but I think its worth all the stardust
and glow-in-the-dark sun spots in the world
to try every
door that opens in front of you

even one that is locked.


I’ll still jiggle the door knob before I walk way




but
shackled here in one place
the place I was
in
two years ago
I don’t think there is much where else to go..



please
please
teach me how to run away





you are so good at it

Author notes

uhh

 

windows of opportunity???

so take every chance you got it wont be there tomorrow????



bad i know but hey i haven't written in forever..
god damn

and i have been running lots hence the whole running away thing

and
yes there is a little of you in this
..

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  • Kiss the girl--x
    January 11

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    'please
    please
    teach me how to run away



    you are so good at it'

    i love those lines.

    amazing

    ♥


  • novacaine.
    January 9

    Edit | Reply
    i really like this..

    especially..
    "I feel my heart pounding in my feet
    little clocks reminding me
    time still exists no matter how hard you close your eyes and try to fall asleep"
    &&
    "please
    please
    teach me how to run away

    you are so good at it"


  • letters to no one
    January 9

    Edit | Reply
    "I feel my heart pounding in my feet
    little clocks reminding me
    time still exists no matter how hard you close your eyes and try to fall asleep"

    I've never seen this described in this way before.
    Wow.



    "but I think its worth all the stardust
    and glow-in-the-dark sun spots in the world"

    I think it can be worth it too =]


  • hks
    January 8
    Edit | Reply
    i think this is amazing.

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