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allurements

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I came with empty mind
senses fresh,
to fill my bosom in remembrances
of my earth's stay.


allurements of colors
with real packed in sweeteners
beckoning me to step aside
albeit conscious saying different.

light is white
rainbow is a reflection
that disappears,
I searched  the sky
possess reflections of my self.

horses driving,
charioteer sitting placid
take me where they want
I lose in my pleasures.

conditioned am I
tastes guide my food,
vision by infatuation
I have a choice

landing my self in pain.



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  • Sir Pelleas
    February 26

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    oh the fruits of laboured thoughts, with self denial and control coming to hold onto that which we desire and that which we fear to take. All steps through life as tempatation bites. Very deep write well done.

  • jadeangyal
    January 28

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    Love the picture! The poem is less concrete. A description of life and the sense that we try to make of it, I think. Good job.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 8

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    Ah..what else one can exdpereince when this life has its own feature to bring the impact over the soul..wonderful expression..and thanks for sharing..


  • maralisa silver member
    January 8
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    a wonderful take on the promt dad good luck inthe contestmaralisa