amongst puzzle pieces
and toothbrushes
I got lost
blue and pink
my curse
I don't know why I can't seem to fly
maybe because
I'm chained to the ground
I don't know where my sanity went
maybe it just disappeared
Author notes
Prompt:
oxygen debt
noun
a cumulative deficit of oxygen resulting from intense exercise; the deficit must be made up when the body returns to rest
as in the stuff that builds up when you run away.
10 lines.
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Uh, bad I know.
I totally abandoned punctuation I know....sorry. Not sure what inspired this.
A contest entry
- quickie by written-in-ink.
400 points, ended January 8, 2009, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Blah-fish
Comments
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Sweet Pea
This is amazing! I love every word of it, and the way you set it up, works soooooo well with it! Great job!
Ek is lief vir jou altyd
Mom
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thank you so much for trying love this was interseting
nice away to look at the prompt
thank you
and im sorry
more quickies and you will love those k?????//
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idk what ur talking about, this is REALLY effckng sweet.
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