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Running to Nowhere

Her feet pound the pavement
Beating the ground on this frozen night
An insignificant figure found
Passing beneath the glare of a street lamp

She knows not where she is going
The only thing she hears is the voice that
Speaks with every stride:
Onward, onward, onward
Keep moving and don't look back

The cold air stings like daggers
In the back of her throat but she dosn't mind
Her only objective is to keep running
For this is her solace, the place she belongs

And the rhythm of the run echoes in the empty streets

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  • broken-colours
    March 9, 2009

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    very descriptive personal poem.
    flows well, kind-of like a story.
    vivid & clear in my mind.

    thank you for sharing.
    <3


  • soccercrosscountry1
    January 9, 2009

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    wow

    this is amazing. I know exactly how you feel. this is such a great write. Wow. I'm just so intrigued with this. It is just amazing. Keep up the great work.
    <3

    • crosscountry07
      January 9, 2009
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      YES! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! Hope you're doing well!