I wanted to fill in all the spaces in-between the brick walls
or all the cracks in the ground
and fade like my kisses on your lips
I never wanted my spine
to be pulled up so that I was left standing on my tippy-toes
and have you slap on wings
only to have you cut them with safety scissors
in mid-flight
Author notes
thank you for lifting me up
just so i could walk on fragile ground [[ eggshells]]
and you could make me crash
fall
and fail
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glad you used safety scissors
that way it didn’t hurt so much
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie! by Merry Christmas.
400 points, ended January 7, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Wisdom Teeth Blues: Indulge me, Please? by broken-colours.
500 points, ended January 22, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"I never wanted my spine
to be pulled up so that I was left standing on my tippy-toes
and have you slap on wings
only to have you cut them with safety scissors
in mid-flight"
Beautiful.
No wonder you won gold, very well deserved.
Shelly
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This one is fantastic. This is total.
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I love it! This is wonderful, seriously. The imagery, the description, the just wonderfullness of it.
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this doesnt count!!
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shut up
damn
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damn you win gold all the time.
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dude you remember that first poem i did
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its where i fell in love with your writting..
what about it??>
and i dont always win gold.
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haha
i remember it!!
i saw it the other day
and i was like woww
this isnt htat bad.
lol
haha
and yes you do!!! haha everytime i look at ur poems.
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lol
then you dont look at my poems that often lol
and
hahah
yeah i know i loved it
but i really dont remember it that well
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your poemsalways get gold!! haha
dont act like i dont see woman. !!
and yeah idk i have no more mojo
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no they dont
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imm sorry
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thanks :]
but still. like idk
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one of them was relly good
and other bits and pieces
you know?
i understand and im sorry
i feel like mine suck to
so idk
how did you liek this one?
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deep and nicely written. it has this third dimention to it too which is cool. actually ur liek the only person who ive seen who has it its really tight. like you go depth and broadness and surface. noone else has the broadness.
i call that skills
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sweet you are so nice
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i really hope you can get back to writting i miss it
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