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Misterious Wiccan Minds !

Missing image

A little box of memories

Forbidden memories are thee

Twilight colored flashing lights

Purple , Red , Green , Yellow

Pink & White moonlight color

Showing us direction , for all to see

From the North , South , East & West!!!!

 

Preparing next , for us to see

Between the tree , of life they be

True lovers trying , walk away

Flowers of love & beauty

Red rose of love , and obsession

For in the moonlight , she appears

To be and have , sugar coated feelings

Our Goddess mother

And of the earth the same.....

 

As she is showing courtesy

Her face in ,  clouded sky!

Giving us all , hope & strength

In one word " Simplisody "

From this water , she is in

Black river moon , Flowing sea hope I see

For my true love , Has saved me

From this over shadowed fate of death.

 

I am the Dragonfly flying

Around in the sky

With in a lake , Twinkling stars I see!

Water Flowing Wind Blowing,

Earth Showing, Like the stars above!

Air that I breath....

Light and darkness Fire

These are the Elements

To some important things

Things I'll Never Say .............

Now it is up to you , To figure out the rest!!!!!

As well as it is , What you believe in ~~~~~

 

Written By: Brenda Gae Harper

December 7, 2009

Author notes

In my poem I chose to use all of the opions above: Picture A,B, C & D as well as the whole word list. Obession, Light and Darkness, Forbidden Memories, Unimportant Things, Black River Moon, Twilight, A Little Box Of Memories, Sugar Coated Feelings, Over Shadowed, Curiousity, Things I'll Never Say, In One Word, Walk Away.....I Hope That You Like It !!!!! It Was A Real Challenge ~~~~~

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  • awannabepoet
    June 10
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    So deserving of that Silver trophy this piece certainly is.

    You have crafted a wonder story with an open ending for our own hearts and minds to fill in the rest.

    Thank you for sharing such a great peom, I really enjoyed reading it.

    Thanks for all your thoughtful comments too.

  • WOW! You amazed me with this. Excellent job my friend. You blew my mind. Congratulations you just won SILVER! ~~Iridessa~~

  • WOW! You amazed me with this. Excellent job my friend. You blew my mind. Congratulations you just won GOLD! ~~Iridessa~~


  • RikkiRae silver member
    January 9

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    This is to me a rather surprising and unique poem, for not only is it filled with beauty and the temptations of the mind but I feel, well at least for me, it causes me to ask some searching questions of myself. If I was asked to select which verse I enjoyed the most, I would have to say your final verse for it took both my mind and my heart, then combined the two into a mutually satisfying entity.

  • kool! i truly loved it! it's beautiful and unique and great. beautiful write!


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 8
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    this is really really beautiful sister

  • Thank You For Having This Contest For All of Us Iridessa MoonFlower ! It was a nice thing for you to do.....Blessings Be To And With You Always My dear !!!!!

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