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Inside This Tender Moment

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Drenched

by the presence

of Love's perfection,


hands & mouths follow

the path of Truth

towards Salvation,


discovering far more

than mythology allows ~

do they even notice the pouring rain?

Wrapped within

their own cocoon of warmth,


wings folded within wings,


they are oblivious

to all that surrounds them

inside this tender moment.


Silence abounds.


How precious,

these sparks of Love

kindled between two souls,


seeking dream's fruition.

They would give up

everything this world offers

only to remain

embraced

by this illumination,

this glimpse of Infinity.

They sway softly,


slow~dancing

to molten music

their hearts create together,

a pulsating rhythm

only they can hear,

lost & found

in each other's eyes...



 

 

 

 

Author notes



Dedicated to Nic & Guy...who know exactly what it means.  


Graphics by orangeacid

www.lovepicturesoflove.net/


"Soul meets soul on lover's lips."

~ by Percy Bysshe Shelly


"The greatest thing you'll ever learn
Is to love and be loved in return."

~ From "Unforgettable with Love" by Natalie Cole

~*~

One I remember from childhood:

"The Love in your heart
wasn't put there to stay ~
Love isn't Love
until you give it away."

~ author unknown


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  • Jonathan ROBIN
    March 10
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    Translations

    They sway softly, slow~dancing to molten music their hearts create together, a pulsating rhythm
    only they can hear, lost & found in each other's eyes...

    The energy drawn from the pulsating rhythm seems to translate into sentiments for all able to key into love's fountain


  • klassy lassy
    January 17

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    How strong the song of the heart is seeking it's voice in the history of 'forever'! Unchained melodies, the light of living.... Love is the Dance.

    And it always knows its own!

    ~Karen


  • Nicolette gold member
    January 16

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    you are just wonderful, Vlindertjie and this poem is so very beautiful. Thank you for the dedication - yes, we know... Love you, my friend!!



    ~ Nicolette

  • mimiagatha
    January 15

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    infinity is composed of infinitons... like this poem. without it, infinity wouldn’t exist


  • untouched pages
    January 14

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    I really enjoyed this write.. It reminds me of when I met my husband. and we hugged for the 1st time. It was like the world just melted away, and we were the only ones around. it was touching reading my feelings in this write!


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    January 10

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    lines six and seven .. this unutterably lovely and romantic poem is worthy of being read after any sunset has begun to color and before any dawn begins to brighten beyond its own desires ... the moon is a jealous lover, you know and kisses and hugs and lovely interludes are its entire purpose for teasing the sun away ... ya know?

    that is where your poem took me. I love this poem. It is so lovely.

    threeturtlesealofdreaminess


  • Oisin silver member
    January 9

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    A very breathtaking way of looking at two lovers lost inside each other. I like how this flows while completely seeming like love is everything. Very Nice Wanda


    • Night Hope gold member
      January 9
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      Thank you, my always discerning Friend. I'm glad you liked my lil' tribute. Love is the ONLY thing, Scribe...'tis the reason we were put here on earth...to find it, to share it, to feel its power, knowledge, joy & harmony. It's the only thing we may take with us when we go & the only thing we may leave behind. I recently made up a quotation about it & put it on my author's page, too...

      "No, one cannot live on Love alone...but without it, the bread is always stale & the hearth is always cold." ~ Wanda Lea Brayton


  • Sonja
    January 9

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    The real embrace is always much more than touch...
    and this poem is a great tribute to our dear friends. 's
    ~Sonja~

  • Jonathan ROBIN
    January 9

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    Wrapped within
    their own cocoon of warmth,
    wings folded within wings,
    seeking dream's fruition,
    lost & found
    in each other's eyes...


  • Daizee silver member
    January 8

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    ..wrapped within their own cocoon of warmth.. wings folded within wings.. I love that part the best


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 8

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    You surely caught the meaning of the image in this beautiful piece!

    "They would give up

    everything this world offers

    only to remain

    embraced"

    WOrds to sigh for...
    I love every line of this and I thank you for being inspired and sharing your heart...

    Lynda


  • transcendental baby gold member
    January 8

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    Girl, you sure know how to make falling in love sound like heaven ... this is certainly divine!


  • kaibab silver member
    January 8

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    Beautiful verse to hold and embrace, such a flower is wraped inside this space of fight through stroms wetter kisses...lovely scribe of hidden blissful bonding

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