Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Give Me A Little Hug. *Hay(na)ku)

Hugs
Put smiles
On glum mugs

Author notes

Hay(na)ku.Six word poem.One word in line 1, two words in line 2, three words in line 3.No rhyme or syllable requirements or restrictions.

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 23

    Edit | Reply
    Very cute. Short and to the point. I appreciate the creativity of this write. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you show your work here!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    January 22

    Edit | Reply
    Paloszoo has asked me to co-judge with an eye to form so this comment is centred on form, my opinion of the rest won't count in the judging

    Another very short and simple form, and you have met the form perfectly as far as I can see

    Jeff

  • amysticwriter silver member
    January 8
    Edit | Reply
    Hugs to you...