At night worlds collide
In exclusive hollow realms Utopia dreams
Author notes
~This style of poetry is called a Haiku
~Haiku poetry is typically constructed of three lines with the first and last having only five syllables and the middle line having 7 (5-7-5) It got it's origin in Japan and these kinds are normally written about nature & the seasons but I love to give things my own twist and not stick to traditions and rules so I made it about dreams because I'm obsessed with analyzing the meanings of the dreams I've had since it's interesting
~I'm also mostly nocturnal and sometimes sleep in the day to stay up and enjoy the view of the Moon and Stars because the Sun commands all the attention in the daytime which makes me think if it had it's own personality it would be an egomaniac and I don't like that-I know that sounds nuts but that's how I think**
~I learned to do Haiku style poetry in school years ago and I love it but I usually stick to the rhyme style because I'm primarily a songwriter and do mainly lyrics and like for them to rhyme and flow properly
**Special thanks to Norbert Rosing & allposters.com for the lovely photograph & to Sweet Impatience for the beautiful background**
A contest entry
- Poetry Styles Contest by Visit.Me.On.Mars.
700 points, ended January 11, 57 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Great work here
Indeed for often dreams do come to real life it is a vision into the unknown mixed with reallity at bay
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I like this one very much because i too like dreaming and i believe that you have mastered this style very nicely
and now that i think about it the sun does seem like he would be a egomaniac Your way of thinking is very different but i like that
Great Job on this poem
Good Luck
---Janette -
Simply wonderful and a great thought
for a Haiku my friend. Congratulations
on this great piece and I hope that you
do well with it in this contest. Thanks
a lot for sharing it here and always a
pleasure to read you! Take care!
Jeremy0286
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nice
i reall like the pic for this piece i love the piece 2 great job keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day
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