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Drone Music




The song was drone, left old within my soul
  where once lived a rippling tune
that was more than we ever were.
 
But now, mostly alone
    the music comes not near as far
  as it did with you and I in love,
  so instead I  strive to startle the heavens with
      the sounds of a final hope.

I am a man who wishes heaven,
  where once earth was highest sought
but gone is the lingering moment
  where her and I both were
  and come is the slower shiver
that drags a lonely heart
  up, to the final passions
      that God calls his own.


   

Author notes

it's a heavy night tonight...


-thefallout
www.theeverlastingfallout.com/read

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