Mice
M u n c h
Mozzerella
Author notes
In Shadow poetry forms.Alliterative in this poem.The Brevette.Three word poem consisting of a noun(Subject), Verb(Action), Noun(Subject).Letters in the action verb may be spaced to indicate an ongoing action.
In a list
A contest entry
- Show Me Some Form (Contest) by Paloszoo.
1000 points, ended January 23, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice descriptive piece. Cute imagery. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you show your work here!
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Paloszoo has asked me to co-judge with an eye to form so this comment is centred on form, my opinion of the rest won't count in the judging
Well it is the shortest form I know, and it appears you have nailed it!
Jeff
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