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Abuse Me

Skim those artists fingers,
Over my shivering stomach.
Flick that electric tongue,
Along my burning neck.
Press that toned body,
Against my adoring one.
Tangle your hands,
In my silky black hair.
Yank so hard,
I scream your name.
Rock with me, baby,
Roll with me.
Roam my body,
Make me yours.
If only for a night.
Set me afire,
For your talented body.
Perspiration slicks my body,
Creating a sheen on me.
As hot breath,
Passes over waiting member.
I'm yours,
For a limited amount of time.
Yours to abuse,
Yours to use.
Slide into me,
Slowly, feel every inch.
Whisper my name,
As I score your back with my nails.
Move within me,
Pushing me higher.
Faster and faster,
Rainbows bloom.
Behind my eyelids.
As your name,
Is jerked from my lips.
Don't stop,
Til you can't move.
Any way you can,
Use me tonight.
For the dawn will come,
And, I'll be back to my senses.

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  • Well geez! You whore! Kidding I like the thought of rainbows blooming behind eyes, that was a great part. Good job, good luck in the contest dear
    Jeanette*~

  • here is some points for u

  • I think that is a nice poem...lots of detail and picture on it. Great work

  • nice job


  • SilentInsanity
    January 7
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    OH BABY!


  • xXCadyBabbiXx
    January 7

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    Oh, wow.
    This is........S/E/X/Y Ivy darling.
    Wowwowowowowow....
    This is hot.
    I dont even know to describe my intense love for this piece.
    You are so talented my love!

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