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Sweet, Succulent You

 

 

 

Luscious lips

succulent tongue

taste of red wine

ripened strawberries

 

spill your passion

all over my body

make me surrender

to your erotic ways

 

ride me hard

like a roaring wave

as I dive deep into you

touching your soft porcelain skin

 

leaving you sated yet,

hungry for more

as I look deep into

your ocean blue eyes

 

tasting your sweetness

as we collide continuously

like two comets

on the same course

 

breaking down every wall

that separates us

every fear and doubt

no longer exists

 

it's just you and me

eternally bound by

endless passion

and heated desires

 

let me taste you

one more time

drink your juices

feel your tenderness

 

our hearts beat in time

as we close our eyes

and fall asleep to the sounds

of the world around us

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: Sugar
Background by: Sweet Impatience

Username: Jeremy0826
11 Entries

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  • Ms Raneika
    January 20
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    Very nice and sensual. very imagenative. Thanks for entering my contest!

    Love, Raneika


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 15

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    how the hell did I miss this one..?? this one is smokin hot, sensual and incredible. The imagery that you've created with your words is mind blowing. You've got such amazing talent for writing erotica my dear brother.
    Congratulations on the Silver Trophy..

    good luck
    kat


  • trekkergirl
    January 11

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    Another of your excellent writes. You definitely are a talented writer my friend. thanks for sharing this.
    And thanks for placing it into our friends reading list.


  • JinSays gold member
    January 9

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    spill your passion
    all over my body
    make me surrender
    to your erotic ways

    let me taste you
    one more time
    drink your juices
    feel your tenderness

    whew.
    now thyis is seduction at it's finest.
    dayum my friend, I am definitely going hooowhoababy, whew.
    Thank you for your time and talent, you've upped the bar in my expectations.

    PS-
    I think the word "spill" is really REALLY sexy.
    Wonderful.
    Love,
    jin


  • Ademon
    January 8

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    As stated before.....Mmmmm LoVe it! Congrats on the Silver Shiny!!!!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    January 8

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    Now this is sensually riveting and so beautiful, thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Rovingone gold member
    January 8
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    Oh wow! I get hot just reading this. What a piece of work.


  • Dragonbabyx3
    January 7

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    mmmm I like this...although it makes me want some strawberries It's sweet and tendar, with a little bit of naughty thrown in. Great write!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 7
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    wow!!

    terribly hot my man! whew damn..you need to put warning labels on this stuff Jer!!

  • Ademon
    January 7
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    OW! OW! OW!

    ....I don't know whether you were trying to make a woman's heart melt or just plain wet....the wording is absolutely flawless and truly amazing...wow... HOT HOT HOT!!!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 7
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    Stop it!Stop it!Stop it!
    Just kidding.

    Nice bro. lol


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    January 7

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    nice baby *kisses* i like this the background is lovely too good luck to you in the contest


  • hotchocolate gold member
    January 7

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    This is what I like here and I love it!!! I wish you luck in the contest hon

    let me taste you
    one more time
    drink your juices
    feel your tenderness

    our hearts beat in time
    as we close our eyes
    and fall asleep to the sounds
    of the world around us











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