She stood in front of me
Feet side by side
She lifted her gun
And looked me straight in the eye.
I didn’t feel scared
As she began to aim
Or as she faintly smiled
And cursed my name.
The irony raged through me
As he stepped at her side
Looking so full of redemption
Looking so full of pride.
It was like being cornered
But I stood firm and tall
I would never let these cowards
Make me feel worthless or small.
She placed a finger to the trigger
I didn’t blink as she pulled it back
I waited for the pain
But only heard his maniacal laugh.
He was silenced as they realized
I was still before their eyes
And as they fell to the ground
I saw the shot had backfired.
Author notes
12-29-08
It's a weird world when you lose your best friend and cousin at once....and they choose eachother over you. : (
Did I get the message across clearly?
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This is one of my favourites so far. I love the way it just changes at the end. Its somewhat like what i like to write. Keep penning.
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thank you very much
glad you like it. yea i love when writing takes an unexpected twist so thought i'd try it out.
thanks for the comment : )
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