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Missing Out

I've waiting for so long
Listening to our favorite song
And still missing out
I've been sleeping on my own
And waiting on the phone
Listening and full of doubt

I've been dreaming in my sleep
Of all things I want to keep
And still missing out
When I stand I start to fall
It's not good enough at all
Waiting for the phone to ring
When it does, friends just say
What's hangin' with you, my man
We're on our way, be there in a while
An' we'll have a case of buds
We can drown in all the suds
An' we'll watch porn just like we used to

Why do you keep waiting for so long?
I'm on tender hooks waiting for you to come along
So come on, babe let's get it on

I've been shuffling in a haze
Like a rat inside a maze
People look at me like I'm crazy
I keep shifting both my feet
Dancing as fast as I can just to keep
Upright so I don't keep missing out

Do you know just what I mean
Come on, babe I keep on missing out...



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Option# 3 Brandy - Have You Ever

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  • wow love this is really good it fits to that song just perfectly its awsome

    thanks for entering and good luck,
    ~*Princess Cuddle Bug*~