My teeth sinking
into your pale flesh-
so soft
so warm
it's like you've been torturing me-
by living
tempting me-
forcing me to respond
now that I've tasted you
and taken your life
I feel fulfilled-
satisfied
though I might miss it-
the way you breathed
and the way you moved
not that I'm complaining-
i got my wish
***
Author notes
I love contests.
Picture inspired: http://media.photobucket.com/image/vampire/audity829/vampire.jpg?o=12
A contest entry
- Poetry Styles Contest by Visit.Me.On.Mars.
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Comments
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even though you killed them, you enjoyed the flavor of their blood more than their presence. <-- how interpreted the poem.
either way, i like it. nice imagery
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Thanks!
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NIce imagery
Thanks for entering
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Thank you. :]
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