O n her back, she dreams of his broad shoulders.
R apture pounds; a crescendo of boulders.
G asping in time with each imagined thrust
A s she is swept by waves of animal lust.
S huddering, back arching off of the bed.
M asturbation's the best sex in your head.
Author notes
Acrostic
A contest entry
- Show Me Some Form (Contest) by Paloszoo.
1000 points, ended January 23, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yeah...that's really all I can say. Yeahhhhh........!
go wild. This one's fun!
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I am glad you enjoyed this. I had fun doing it as an acrostic. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Mike
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Paloszoo has asked me to co-judge with an eye to form so this comment is centred on form, my opinion of the rest won't count in the judging
I would have preferred to see your initial letters not separated out but that is the poet's choice, a very well worked acrostic, and a pretty decent orgasm too!
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Thanks for reading and commenting. Intially when I did acrostics I did not seperate the letters on the leading words. I don't really care for it either. This is about the only way I could think of to answer critics that said they did not realize a certain poem was an acrostic.
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Give 'em reading lessons
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Very creative and HOT use of this form. And rhyming too. Nicely done. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you show your work here!
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Thanks. I kind of drew a blank on it. Initially it was going to be a combination of alliteration and an acrostic, but i ran out of steam. Thank you for reading and commenting and hosting the contest.
Mike
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Well well well....
You are a dark horse my friend
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Thank you very much. Sometimes I don't know what gets into me.
Mike
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All serious, and then the last line cracks me up... very clever ending!
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Haha. Thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad you liked it. I was not sure that you would care for it.
Mike
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damn! woottttttt! goddamn it Mike.. this is hot! loved it!
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Glad you liked this one. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Mike
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Im not going to touch this one
nu uh.
Love,
jin
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Did I leave you tongue tied? The Great Jin is speechless? Damn, I am good !!
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. . . . .you wish
LOL
but Im still not gonna touch this
nu uh
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my sentiments exactly...
with fantasy-fueled masturbation, there are no limits, no taboos, nothing forbidden, no reason to stop reaching for more...lovely!1
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem.
Mike
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hehe Guess ya gotta do what ya gotta do Well done acrostic Chucks. No further comment as I might increminate myself lol Good luck to you!
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Glad you liked it and found a bit of yourself in the poem. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Mike
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