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Journeying To Your Heart

Everyday avails us a lesson to learn,
whichever way we comprehend:slow or swift,
truth is,somethings we just can't earn,
like your friendship's been a modest gift.

Everyday your essence cuts through,
suiting my every desire.
Through the years,let it still be you,
only you-sustain this fire.

Like I say:"I'ld always be there."
So let these words further resound the chime;
Everytime I say:"I care"
I mean it more than the last time.

I'ld doggedly push every limit,
till fate draws us together.
So if fate would permit,
I'ld anchor my heart on yours...forever.

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She's all I think of and more....She's the dream I wanna wake up to meet.

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  • ayo8
    May 25

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    very simple bt passes d msg across very precise nt 2 many words bt extremely strong expression goin all d way very gd really impressed.kip it up


  • tjdougan
    January 28
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    HMMMMMMMMMMM..

    Tunji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv seems to be in the air again. Anywa i feel the poem...had to hide my admiration when i read it in front of you. You get better with each poem...that's remarkably awesome...keep letting ur thoughts and feelings out....like dem teach us for GNS, it's philosophy!!!!! lol.


    • demuren
      January 28
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      thanks tjdougan.

      thanks for the comments man...although I have quite a few comments about it but i'ld rather tell you in person....cheers!!!