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Dreamers



lost the fight
of her youthful dreams
the reign of time keeps falling down

through a window
saturated sadness penetrates
wisdom cries “How, to continue now?”

hopes are banished
from this predestined lifetime
conveying only a possibility to another dreamer



Author notes

Knot2tangled, I chose pic 16

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  • Kathraina silver member
    January 7

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    Love the concept in this piece. Great imagery and flow too! Great piece! Good luck!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Lee Tai Wah
    January 7
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    Hi Knot2tangled

    It's so sad but so apt.