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The Walk

Walk with me
I need you now
Listen to me my dear
Im lost along the path of life
I really need you now
Just hold my hand
Until the path is clear
I need you near
Your support & strength
To fight my fears & wipe away my tears
Walk with me
I know our love is powerful
Together we'll make it through
With you walking beside me
Im not afraid of anything new
Walk with me
The path of life is confusing
How do I walk without you?
I need you now, Like you needed me
I love you my dear
Take a walk with me

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  • Applehead
    January 15

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    This has such an air of subtle yet desperate love and devotion. So special to feel like this about someone yet it can leave you very vulnerable as you have shown in this well written poem.

    "I really need you now
    Just hold my hand
    Until the path is clear
    I need you near
    Your support & strength
    To fight my fears & wipe away my tears"

    This touches me most maybe because I have been here

    Thankx 4 the addz btw


  • flowerbudd
    January 12
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    very expressive, a lovely write


  • bluestoneangel
    January 7
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    very good!