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Walking Stick

They have left me now
My childhood heroes
My dreams
Loves long hair and dark eyes
As wild horses chasing sunsets.

Come now, the Specters
Of the dark unknown
No longer warmed of the sun
Nights of unresolved memories
and unwise choices.

So be it ___
I chose to be & do, no other than I am.

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  • Suzanne Dia
    February 27
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    last line sums it up as I would like to myself
    it is how I feel at the end of the day when the door is closed and time is mine until sleep takes me..

    i choose to be and do ... as I am .. and that is who I will always be and what I will always do.

    Choice, though
    many don't take ownership of that.

    Sage words.
    I like 'em


  • afroqban
    January 28
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    oh i agree with this. and this is a fine piece of art here.

  • Phantomdreaming
    January 21

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    great poem...I especially love the last line about being yourself...very important. bercause many people choose to forget that aqt times.


  • myrataal silver member
    January 10
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    Expression of contentedness

    In the own skin happiness is very simple.