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this i say to you

i've said how i feel
now it's up to you
where this goes
i want you to say it
back but i don't want
to push you in to
anything baby

i feel so naked
around you, i feel
as though nothing
can happen to me.
you make me feel
so free.

i used to be a thorn,
but now because of
you i feel like a
beautiful rose.

i can say anything to you,
i let my walls down and be
competely safe with you
i'd do anything for you,
baby.

i never want to let
you go, i want to
stay in your arms forever
i hope you feel the same,
baby.

i'll cut my heart out
and give it to you
hoping you'll take it
with open arms
placing it next to yours
this i say to you baby.

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