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Anquish

With much learning comes much sorrow.
What I know I have swallowed.
Who I am; who I am not.
Black on white, paper and blot.

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  • goalsv
    January 8, 2009
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    Nicely done, good take onthe picture.

  • mcheadle
    January 8, 2009
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    I think at times we all feel this way.

    Just to remember who the Master is is the only way...mac


  • Angelflower
    January 7, 2009

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    so what are the words that are perfect? They appear before my eyes, upon the page I now see....

    a wonderful take on the prompt! I truly loved the imagery and flow here, you did such a great job! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 7, 2009
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    and then the words...come....oh so slowly..

    Nice write


    Simon