School...
It's a waste of time, I don't learn
I just sit there in concern
I hear whispering behind my back
Just because I wear all black
If only they knew
The pain I go through
Go one day in my shoes
And all you will hear all day is boos
Then maybe you will appreciate us
And not blow us off like dust
That'd be a wonderful wish to come true
And then I wouldn't be so blue
What did you think
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People can be so mean at times. And it's quite ridiculous. If they only did walk a day in your shoes, I'm sure they would see things from a different perspective.
Thank you for sharing this with us -
Wow amazing write!
I understand and can relate to this...Im not at school today Im scared Of people laughing at me :|
Your not alonee,I know how you feel.
Great write keep the pen going.
Tash.
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I understand
This is ah-mazing. Just get through life the best you can.
Know someone you don't even know thinks about you every night...okay that was a little creepy....but You know what I mean.
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Good piece here, you know I was in school and it was the same back then, anyone who is 'different' gets talked about, or picked on, it is part of life. It has been happened since God knows when. So just try to ignore it, or do the same back.
As far as the poem goes there is a really good flow and it is a very enjoyable read with very strong emotions. It was structured very well. Good write, but you got to deal with life, anytime you go against the normal, someone is not gonna like you -
maybe you should be more positive, my dear.
yeah, i know you're 'emo' and yeah you wear black, so do i.
what do you have to be sad about? people making fun of you?
i'm sorry dear, i'm really and truely not being mean, but you better get used to it.
try looking on the brighter side. honestly. -
this is awesome!!
this happens all the time at school for me...... keep writing... you rock! -
I know how you feel. Great job. Keep up the excellent writing
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i would understand you.its okay
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This is really nice, my only suggestion (altho I hate wen people think they know it all but its an opinion) is that you try not rhyming in a piece like this, I think it would be easier to feel more pain and the message that is being sent. Idk just my opinion
But it was quite nice
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oh thats true they never think good of us just hate and very bad things if they did know thed regret making us suffer
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