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destiny gone

I've leveled out from sin, repaired my destiny
What would you ask that I haven't already seen
simple and plain the beauty is slain
but I've found the key to loving me
In finding myself I know theres always more to learn
life has new roads, new challenges new turns
but in finding my way at the end of the day
I know i have love for you too
see hon, it all balances out

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