In the dark nights
I play little games -
ones with no meaning.
{I lose every time}
After days go by
I see no new light
and I beg for death.
Author notes
30 words
option 3
A contest entry
- 12/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended January 14, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
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excellent poem that you've written. the imagery is not only intense but powerfully dark. many times I could relate to the last three lines. been there way too many times.. such a dark emotionally poem
good luck
kat
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great take on the prompt. i enjoyed reading your poem and thanks for sharing. good luck. =)
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a very powerful take onthe promt good luck inthe contestmaralisa
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Very dark! But beautifully penned
Lonliness often can take on a life of its own. Wonderful job portraying its lurking shadow. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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Very sad and painful words!
Well done and great thought for
this prompt. All the best to you
with it here and take care!
Jeremy0826
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