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Midnight Sun

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Quietude, splendor perks jaunty skies,
midnight hour reflects in widened eyes.
Stellar beauty could never be man made,
Heavenly Father created to never fade.

Over land midnight sun rise and shine,
wanders, lingers in this world of mine.
Lightens darkness with bursting rays,
unyielding sunsets, nights turn to days.

Walk hand in hand, upwards we gaze,
spectacular vista, evenings to amaze.
Made with perfection a long time ago,
sunbeams emitting a wondrous glow.



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Title Midnight Sun

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  • januaryrain gold member
    January 7, 2009
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    Beautiful, it's soft and soothing to the soul, just like a sunset.
    well done


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 8, 2009
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      Thank you for stopping by and reading. You take care, Sandy


  • Saint Irial
    January 7, 2009

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    Quite nice... enjoyable... although I would let go of "sol"... as it means the same as sun... it really... I dunno if taftology is a valid english words but it really makes the piece slightly less appealing... at least that's how I percieve it.


    • Sandygram silver member
      January 7, 2009
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      Thank you for reading and the nice comment and the advice. I changed it. Take care, Sandy


  • bluestoneangel
    January 7, 2009
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    BEAUTIFUL

    • Sandygram silver member
      January 7, 2009
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      Thank you for the comment. Most appreciated. Take care, Sandy

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